Theme: Parting


Can you see the restlessness of the lake
Inside my heart that was once placid?
Seems like it is struck by the tempest
Of your sudden unexpected farewell.
Even the moon is hiding under cloud’s veil
As it can’t see my sparkling eyes in disgrace,
Even the trees are bending their heads in gloom
As they can overhear the screech of my soul.

Even the sky is howling in the blues,
As it can feel the anguish burning me within.
Even the night is turbulently tumultuous
As it can sense the gales whacking my heart.
Can’t you see it when everyone else can?
How invariably I love you ignoring all rules;
Don’t you know your farewell will kill me
Every single day for the rest of my life?


More By  :  Rupradha Mookerjee

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Comments on this Poem

Comment your appreciations inspired me a lot!! Thanks Debalina Ji

31-May-2012 07:34 AM

Comment parting is always painful.n more is remembering the time spent together.that hurts..this is aptly clear with ur 'farewell'

31-May-2012 06:22 AM

Comment Yes, Rupradha the parting is painful, and the whole nature is with you to share you longing. Well composed.

Kumarendra Mallick
06-Dec-2011 13:51 PM

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