Theme: Deception

Once I had a Doubt

Once I had a doubt, is this one poetry?
Then the strolling sun told me
No this one is not.
Then the cricket field
Then the Aghran northerly wind
Then the ripples in the pond
Then the straying plume of
Traveler swan
Then the twinkle of  night sky graze.
Someone’s orange flavored palm
One’s dark eyes
One’s fur coated bosom 
One’s deepest sip into date palm lips
All said no this time no
And never, for ever.


More By  :  Kausik Bhaduri

Views: 1376     Comments: 4

Comments on this Poem

Comment I have no doubt, this one is poetry.

24-Jan-2012 01:21 AM

Comment very nice poem..liked it...thanks for sharing.

Seema banerjee
19-Jan-2012 10:26 AM

Comment good poem

ishita bhaduri
18-Jan-2012 10:43 AM

Comment i liked the poem. some words and phrases are melodous picturesqu, like orange flavoured palm, date palm lips etc.

soma roy
18-Jan-2012 07:01 AM

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