Theme: Desire

How Nice!

by Sony Dalia
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If I can slip through drops of rain
Without getting wet,
If I can swim across puddles
Without busting buoyant bubbles,
If I can hop from flower to flower
Without frittering their fragrance,
If I can mingle with butterflies
Without stealing colours from their wings…
How nice it will be, dear!
 
If I can climb an ivy quietly
Without alarming a relaxing leaf,
If I can sprint along a shore
Without upsetting a meditating crab,
If I can watch dusk or dawn
Without scaring a bird on wing,
If I can sway with ecstatic crops in breeze
Without startling a comely farm-hand...
How nice it will be, dear!
 

26-Jan-2012

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Comments on this Poem

Comment Dreaming of peace and romanticism all around us... a wonderful poetrait of good things!! Very nice to read your composition.

Kumarendra Mallick
28-Jan-2012 03:33 AM

Comment the perception shows imagination, poetic sensibility and love for nature.The impossibility of desire gives the poem a tender,touch. i would have loved to borrow colours from the butterflies and it would be wonderful to get wet in the rain, why seek escape without getting wet?
The use of so many sibilants- 25 in such a short poem makes it a sad poem.
asha viswas


asha viswas
28-Jan-2012 03:28 AM

Comment How creative and imaginative!

kulbirbhalla
27-Jan-2012 20:51 PM

Comment But I can not leave the page without commenting on this lovely poem... composed where peace resonates and love sublimates. Thank you for sharing the dreams...

Kumarendra Mallick
27-Jan-2012 12:01 PM


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