Theme: Dream

You And I

Last night I had a wonderful dream.
It was a fresh dawn shining with gleam,
We were rowing in a lovely placid lake,
A beautiful journey we were to take;
We rowed amidst some swans so bright
In the crimson sun’s first sunlight!

The chirping of birds added more to it,
It was life’s most wonderful treat,
With no one around, just you and I,
Together in one boat under the azure sky!
Lost in the mystery of nature’s splendor,
It was love and life’s amazing blender,
You and I – two immaculate lovers,
That’s all what true love discovers.

Eyes in eyes so intensely fixed
Passion and desires, in them, mixed,
Sailing under the pristine cobalt sky,
It was our moment – just you and I.


16-Feb-2012

More By  :  Rupradha Mookerjee

Views: 1410     Comments: 6

Comments on this Poem

Comment Thanks a lot Skylark Ji!! Browning's poems are really magical!! :)

Rupradha
19-Feb-2012 14:01 PM

Comment It reminds me of Browning's 'The Last Ride Together'.

Hush! if you saw some western cloud
All billowy-bosom'd, over-bow'd
By many benedictions--sun's
And moon's and evening-star's at once--
And so, you, looking and loving best,
Conscious grew, your passion drew
Cloud, sunset, moonrise, star-shine too,
Down on you, near and yet more near,
Till flesh must fade for heaven was here!--

skylark
19-Feb-2012 10:24 AM

Comment @Kulbir Ji: Thanks a ton!! I loved your poem!! So sweet of you!!

rupradhamookerjee
18-Feb-2012 01:56 AM

Comment @Kumar Ji: thereafter I woke up from my dream into reality!! Thanks a lot!! :)

Rupradha
18-Feb-2012 01:54 AM

Comment Evocative, celebrating life!
(See the poem "Celebrate Life" dedicated to you!)

Kulbir
17-Feb-2012 13:26 PM

Comment ... and thereafter, Rupradha what happened! You rocked each other's heart till sailor and the sailed became one!! I liked this composition. Thank you.

Kumarendra Mallick
17-Feb-2012 08:57 AM


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