I am the verb and she my adverb,
Qualifies and quantifies
My moves, movements, stirrings and doings;
I am the action and she is its description and style;
Endearingly she showers love and affection
Inspiring me to compose and create.
Daringly I enjoy her every bit, moment and thing,
In our intimate moments to the hilt blissfully;
She is the cheque and I am her encasher;
She is the check on
My emotions, actions, reactions and interactions;
Lovingly she obliges and cooperates
In the exhilarating union of our hearts and bodies.
Also, I am noun and she is my adjective,
Qualifies and quantifies me and my existence;
We are parts of speech, grammar, vocabulary and sense
In the language of our love and intimacy;
We are eternal and one as the word and its meaning
Are related as verb and adverb;
And I am the flow, she is the speed
I am the glow and she is the light.
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Thank you Jayaraman Sir for the kind attention and learned observation.
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I am the verb and she my adverb,
Qualifies and quantifies -
The first letter of the first two lines of your great poem,
ie I and Q , proved your IQ in English!
Really wonderful, Sir!
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Thank you TagoreBlog for the kind attention and inspiring observation. I am delighted. Regards.
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Thank you Hema for the kind attention and inspiring observation.
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Interesting read....the subject and the objective!
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Very good, reminds Kalidasa's famous simile.
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