If...

by Jan Oscar Hansen

If all was lucid
If god was not a mystery
If life lacked meaning
If life was pure reasoning
If night was empty of dreams
If sky had no birds
If snowflakes held no wonder
If rainbows were grey
If love was a chemical reply
If so, wouldn´t it be hell?

21-Feb-2012

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Comments on this Poem

I will i will

janoscarhansen
12-Oct-2012 11:02 AM

this one is too good!!

Rupradha
12-Oct-2012 01:59 AM

difficult to get right

janoscarhansen
24-Feb-2012 15:52 PM

Lovely composition. However, the two lines have become to weak to your very strong poem. Perhaps you can conclude:

If love was a chemical reaction,
If so, wouldn't life be a mere hallucination?

However, I was inspired to write a poem on similar line, 'If my wishes...'. Please have a look at it. Thank you, Hansen.

Kumarendra Mallick
24-Feb-2012 02:10 AM