Fulfillment

by Kulbir Bhalla

Fulfillment I seek
Thru writing verse;
I tweak and tweak,
And make it terse.

I polish every word
And make it pretty,
So when it's heard,
It sounds witty.

At Boloji, I show,
And quietly rejoice
When I come to know
It made Editor's Choice.

04-Apr-2012

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Comments on this Poem

Nathmalji,

I am truly so grateful to you for your heartfelt appreciation. You always make my day with your kind and loving words. My humble and sincere thanks.

kulbirbhalla
27-Feb-2015 10:37 AM

When you cut,polished so nice every word of it.
Which improved quality of it's prettiness & wit.
I sudden stop myself to hear the sound for a bit. To be part of editor's choice, says it a jewel's kit.
I often see & enjoy it but didn't prevent to repeat.
Thanks a lot KulbirJi, I salute your wisdom & wit.

(I shall await a comment from your side.)

Nathmal Sharma
27-Feb-2015 08:47 AM

'Fulfilment" has fulfilled my heart,body and mind with nice emotions.Though,they were released on some occasion from the treasure of your deep thoughts,yet haven't lost their magical effect upon me.I am so greatful to you.A lot of thanks again & again Kulbir Ji.Hope,You will be in nice health.

Nathmal Sharma
17-Sep-2014 13:12 PM

Nathmalji,

Thank you once again so much for your apprec

Kulbir
11-Aug-2013 20:04 PM

You are an architect of words who cuts & polishes every word of his creation
so well that spectator feels it amazing & marvellous like me.Thank you very
much for your poem having a quality of repeating and editor's choice.

Nathmal Sharma
11-Aug-2013 15:07 PM

Nathmalji,

Thank you so much for appreciating my verses - muchas gracias!

Kulbir
29-Mar-2013 09:53 AM

'Fulfillment' fulfils the simplicity and enjoyment of heart.I have read it several times but didn't satiate .A lot of thanks.

Nathmal Sharma
29-Mar-2013 03:40 AM

lovely!! plz read my poem The Rising Sun!!

Rupradha
05-Apr-2012 08:31 AM