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Theme: Journey


I was the boat
That ferried you forward
Was happy to travel with you
On the waves of time
Till you reached your banks
And I moved away
To sail towards another shore of destiny 


More By  : Dr. Madhavi Godavarthy

Views: 1350     Comments: 3

Comments on this Poem

Comment Very realistic description of life situation. Any condition of life can't be continue till whole time.
So many changes are taken place time to time.
Whole life Chemistry is changeable. So we feel sometimes pleasure and sometimes sorrow.It
is destiny of every creature,which is arranged
by God as according his Karmas. We should try
our best to do any work or behaviour. Rest to leave upon God,Otherwise we shall feel despair
as it is shown in the poem.A lot ot thanks for
depicting actual truth of life.Thank you very
much Mam.The poem is very small but good.

Nathmal Sharma MertaCity
18-Jun-2014 10:23 AM

Comment Thank you Dr Veluri for your words of appreciation.

27-Apr-2012 08:11 AM

Comment the attachments and detatchments of life well phrased in a nutshell

26-Apr-2012 13:09 PM

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