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Just One Question

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In the realm of heartbroken lovers,
I am a lost and lonely voyager,
Having a journey of twelve hundred days,
And still counting on the anguish maze,
Tears have their abode in my eyes,
Grief has its subsistence in my sighs,
Agony has its moaning in my mind,
In my words torments are entwined.

Happiness forgets to visit me now-a-days,
This is literally my life’s toughest phase.
Ever since you’re gone, I am in relentless pain,
I wonder if my melancholy can ever wane.
Your touch that drenched me once in rhapsody,
Is still engraved in every pore of my body.
All those times are now sheer memories,
And I am left with sad stories of miseries.

Now you only neglect me like I am no one to you,
Will you ever realize the pain I’m going through?
All my hopes that my love will be returned,
All my desires and dreams are now burned.
I have just one question to my Holy God,
What is my fault that my love got trod?
When I had loved you right from the start
With every bit of my abandoned heart?
 
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21-Aug-2012

More By  :  Rupradha Mookerjee

Views: 1593     Comments: 13

Comments on this Poem

Comment hariharraijha ji, thanks a lot..

Rupradha
18-Nov-2013 14:40 PM

Comment Nice poem. Well expressed!

hariharraijha
09-Jul-2013 21:03 PM

Comment very well said..and thank you very much Prafulla Ji!!

rupradhamookerjee
22-Aug-2012 12:40 PM

Comment Perhaps love does not wish to abandon you.lover is man made,
love is divine.blessed are you to realize such sweet pain.very very rhythmic and touching indeed.

Prafulla Sahu
22-Aug-2012 12:22 PM

Comment am glad you liked it Madhavji..thnx a lot.

rupradhamookerjee
22-Aug-2012 01:42 AM

Comment wonderful Kumarji..u hv such a golden heart..thanks for feeling the pain of an abandoned lover. I would like to reply like Mam has said-
Kuchh Sawaalon Ke Jawaab Nahin Hote
Kuchh Sawaal Poochhe Nahin Jaate.

rupradhamookerjee
22-Aug-2012 01:41 AM

Comment Thank you so much Aparna Mam..your lines show the reality of life!!

rupradhamookerjee
22-Aug-2012 01:38 AM

Comment
Simply unfathomable . Wonderfull. So sweet ! Hats off to you

Madhav Sarkunde
22-Aug-2012 01:14 AM

Comment I have one question to you, Rupa,
will your love and waiting not bring him back?
If so, may I volunteer to visit that land
even if I walk in water or on desert sand...

Your longing and yearning bleed my heart,
will there be a better lover than you on this earth???

Kumarendra Mallick
21-Aug-2012 13:29 PM

Comment
Welcome, Rupradha

Loved your last lines...

I have just one question to my Holy God,
What is my fault that my love got trod?
When I had loved you right from the start
With every bit of my abandoned heart?

Thought of replying with these 4 lines...

Kuchh Sawaalon Ke Jawaab Nahin Hote
Kuchh Sawaal Poochhe Nahin Jaate
Kuchh Log Apne Nahin Hote
Kuchh Sapne Saakar Nahin Hote

http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/sawaal/

alwaysaparna
21-Aug-2012 13:18 PM

Comment thanks a lot for your heart warming responses Kingshuk Ji & Bharat Ji!! Thank you so much Aparna Mam for liking it & giving it a meaningful picture!!

rupradhamookerjee
21-Aug-2012 12:48 PM

Comment It's full of pain.but very well written poem..!
May Holy God grant you what you desire....

Bharat Mehru
21-Aug-2012 10:37 AM

Comment A heart-felt poem...........so nicely written!

Kingshuk
21-Aug-2012 10:28 AM


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