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I Miss You Most When You Don’t Miss Me At All
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by Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee |
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When the sky becomes crimson red
I miss you Anamika
When the cuckoo coos sitting on the palash trees
Sweetheart I miss you
When the apple turns red from green in Kashmir
I miss you now and then
When the boughs are loaded with mango shoots
I miss you since the dawn
When frosty winter lashes at the door
I miss your warmth in the lonely room
When the mailbox is filled with letters from others
I miss you, miss you dawn to dusk
When I am at mess and feel all alone
I miss you in the crowd
I miss you when you don’t see my e-card in your mailbox
Or when you don’t log in
But I miss you most Anamika
When you don’t miss me at all.
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28-Aug-2012 |
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Comments on this Poem
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very emotive. Nice work, Sir.
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bravo sir!
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Another awesome piece of writing..i must say....keep writing..may u get huge success in whatever u endeavour... :)
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excellent and so heart touching
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Truly appreciated.
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beautiful expression of tender feelings..wow ratanda..
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I appreciate this poem for its conceit. your poem reminded me of John Donne terminology from technology is used to express the feeling of the poet. Metaphysical, thats how i look at the poem.
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superb sir...!
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Quite appreciable !
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excellent!! am so impressed Sir!! Keep it up!!
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