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Let Me In...

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Let me into the realm of your thoughts
Beyond the spoken
And the felt
Till I merge into the magnitude of your silence.

Let me into the coolness of your touch
A thousand births and deaths
Being baptized again and again
Till my name is lost in yours.

Let me into your songs of triumph
And your dirges of sorrow
Looking at the world from a cliff
Till I laugh and cry only with you.

Let me into the beat of your heart
Your breath, your warmth
Your proof of a life lived
Till my river of thoughts flow into your ocean.

Let me in on that spark in your being
That exists in no-man's land
That ignites a spark in mine
Let me into your soul...

Image © Glory Sasikala Franklin


More By  :  Glory Sasikala Franklin

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Comments on this Poem

Comment Hi Ramen, Max and Usha,

Thank you so much for your comments.

Ramen: I'm glad my poetic soul touched a chord in yours.

Usha: Ah, Um, Usha. :))

Max: I value your opinion so much!


24-Sep-2012 01:06 AM

Comment an excellent write!!

23-Sep-2012 12:18 PM

Comment Beautiful poem Glory. I have already read it a number of times. The imagery is riveting and makes you go back to the poem again and again.
Thanks for letting us into your (poetic) soul!


Ramendra Kumar
05-Sep-2012 06:21 AM

Comment Lovely poem Glory.I know you have a big cache there.waiting for it...usha

04-Sep-2012 08:58 AM

Comment An amazingly simple and yet complex poem, one that offers layer upon layer of meanings, on subsequent readings. The picture chosen above compliments the loveliness of the poem rather uncannily well. Great !


Max Babi
04-Sep-2012 07:30 AM

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