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Loved this beautiful poem and also all the poetic responses to it. Great write Rajji. Respects.
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A beautiful and touching poem. It is a pleasure to experience a blessed and graceful nostalgia in remembering one's mother.
The loving care she took of us at all times has no parallel.
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Thats what I tell people,
when they ask me where are you?
Revisiting motherhood
With mix of pink and blue...
When my little bundle of joy,
gives a smile and look at me
All the pain of living on toes
run to change in heartfelt glee..
She keeps me tangled in a thing or two
But makes sure she hugs and kisses me a lot
On being a mother, i felt all through the same
what you wrote above, is akin to what i thought..
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A very beautiful poem, loved it. You have captured the various nuances of the first steps towards motherhood beautifully.
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It left me reflecting if there is anything tenderer than the soul of a mother. The expression of thought and emotion is an unexcelled epitome of womanhood in motherhood! Thanx for sharing, dear Rajinderji.
Loving regards,
RKBhushan
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Motherhood is holy and each expression about its glory is a poem indeed. I could not help closing my eyes growing wet when I came to the line "the most wanted child" when it is a girl. When will the day come when all of us would welcome the birth of a child, girl or boy! Your poem is a silent lesson indeed.
Prema Nandakumar
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In the poetic essence of woman, lies the broader picture of life.
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Nice little cute poem. Lovely indeed
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bravo. couldnt have expressed the advent motherhood more expressively. thsoe early days are the wonder and the joy before those slog overs.
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Whatever is said about the glory of motherhood, in reality it is a thankless job. Fortunate are those who can manage to nourish their personal interests along with the duties of motherhood.
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I loved the prelude, the style of presentation and flow of your poem. Very soothing to read, I should say. Thanks and congratulations.
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Superb Sir! As a feminist tho' I am given to the idea that we make too much of motherhood.
But when I read a poem like this it reminds me, but for my mother I would not have been here to appreciate the poem!!
Regards,
Julia
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Lovely poem, Rajenderji. I am sure every parent would be able to identify with the feelings you have so beautifully etched out.
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This was a beautiful poem on 'Being a Mother' but what appealed more was an experimental approach in composing and a wonderful selection of words giving a vivid pen-sketch.
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Your poems have become more and more deeper in their meaning and they just flow through the mind like brook. Keep it up bhai.
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So expressive! In short lines are packed the beautiful pleasures of motherhood! I loved the last stanza! Amen!
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Lovely bouquet of beautiful feelings.On being a mother is the gift of God.She , in fact, reflects God's love and blessings.Regards.
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Really ...it’s soaked with essence of human sensation ...nice one.......
Nice sir .
sagar
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What a beautiful poem.
Parenting is an awesome responsibility. When done well it is the ultimate bliss.
I am reminded of a verse from our scriptures; The essence of it is as follows:
"If you want to experience God, become a parent. That is the closest you will ever get in shaping someone else's destiny who puts complete and unconditional trust in you".
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Nice poem to read!
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Two subjects in life
Hard to understand
Easy to experience
Unending to express
The invisible protection of the almighty
The unconditional love of the mother
Incidentally for both we happen to be
Children who are always near and dear
And in your whole narration you have beautifully embedded the creative excellence of the almighty and the tenderness of motherhood....
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A new baby changes it all
Summer winter and fall
Makes all around feel tall
A bundle of joy to enthrall
Your poem is about the natural beauty, Rajender Krishan ji, I loved it. I wish I could write as well as you do. All I can say is :
A new baby changes it all
Summer winter and fall
Makes all around feel tall
A bundle of joy to enthrall
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The beautiful flow of life...enthralling and eternal!
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