Theme: Caring


Often it puzzles
For days together
It has been ages
Since those fateful
Years and days
When we met last
Or better to say
Parted ways and lost
In vast ocean of life
With heavy heart.

With no trace of
Those youthful emotions
And tender feelings
No passion or romance
Remained in the life,
What is that thread
That binds us so fast,
In my lonesome solitude
I still keep caring in
Every moment that lasts
So much about you,
Your welfare, prosperity
And peace of mind?

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More By  : Dr. Jaipal Singh

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Comments on this Poem

Comment It's not very common, yet pattern is same! So it's not strange if your heart feels likewise.

24-Sep-2012 09:45 AM

Comment whatever my heart feels is so similar..great poem.

23-Sep-2012 14:21 PM

Comment Raj Ji, I am grateful for you mature and objective review.

22-Sep-2012 10:59 AM

Comment Compassion Beyond Borders and Limitations. The poem highlights the feelings that awaken with the pangs of separation.

22-Sep-2012 09:40 AM

Comment It's difficult to respond, Kulbir Ji, yet thanks for good wishes.

22-Sep-2012 09:35 AM

Comment Jai Sahib,
There's a deep longing within you - May God fulfill it.

21-Sep-2012 12:37 PM

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