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Theme: Perspective

Light and Dark

Luminosity of light
is truly adored
only after darkness
has been endured

Joy of relief
is celebrated
only after pain
has been cured

Entrepreneur's talent
becomes a skillful class
when seeking profits
he also bears the loss

Self-esteem
gets inflated
when arrogant ego
gets deflated

22-Sep-2012

More By  :  Rajender Krishan

Views: 1539     Comments: 25

Comments on this Poem

Comment very well written

Priyadarshini
27-Sep-2012 06:25 AM

Comment Beautiful!

Malik Rashid
26-Sep-2012 08:01 AM

Comment Dear Rajinderji,
I read your poem for the second time. I have felt that there is a soothing and melodious blend of your poetic and professional, and seemingly personal, learning and lore in this poem. I remember when I took the IAS Exam. in 1969, there was a topic for Essay writing-
Youth is a blunder; manhood a struggle and old age a repentence. I reshaped the thought as-
Youth is a struggle, manhood a luxury and old age a comfort.
Surely, after through the pitch dark, we enjoy truly and are dazzled by the light. Let us close our eyes at the dazzle for a while and see the divine radiance around!
Loving regards.
Sincerely,
RKBhushan

Prof. RKBhushan
26-Sep-2012 01:22 AM

Comment Love the last stanza.
Poets say so much in so little. You are a good one.

drgopalsingh
25-Sep-2012 19:24 PM

Comment A simple but truthful poem. God has created two 'extremes' and one extreme depends for its worth on the other extreme. This is the essence of life and we must except life in its totality -- considering both extremes! The picture associated with the poem makes it more meaningful.

Suniti Chandra Mishra
25-Sep-2012 03:07 AM

Comment Epigrammatic - poetically very effective without wastage of words.

TagoreBlog
24-Sep-2012 23:35 PM

Comment Statement of pure truth in the garb of poem..

Nalinaksha Mutsuddi
24-Sep-2012 04:01 AM

Comment Very true. Beautifully put. Thanks for sharing.

Ramendra Kumar
24-Sep-2012 00:35 AM

Comment My sincere thanks to everyone for appreciating.

Raj
23-Sep-2012 16:32 PM

Comment Astutely observed. May I add, we cannot even define GOOD, unless BAD existed. Of course, people may differ over their perceptions of good and bad!!

Dipankar Dasgupta
23-Sep-2012 14:09 PM

Comment Lovely lines. Realistic and well written.

Shail Raghuvanshi
23-Sep-2012 12:40 PM

Comment excellent!!

Rupradha
23-Sep-2012 12:08 PM

Comment Words of experience this brief poem speaks clear!

taramesh
23-Sep-2012 07:51 AM

Comment Very nice verse. Keep sharing more...

bharat b trivedi
23-Sep-2012 03:10 AM

Comment Good thoughts... hope the Nation and her leaders read and understand the same...

Rajdeep Pathak
23-Sep-2012 03:02 AM

Comment wah kya baat hai, rajendrji. some tings are so obvious but need tobe pointed out by a poet like you..

kusum
23-Sep-2012 02:20 AM

Comment Realistic....

G Swaminathan
23-Sep-2012 02:14 AM

Comment Sure, experiencing the antipodes is necessary to truly appreciate what one rejoices

pgrnair
23-Sep-2012 01:28 AM

Comment Experience not advice explains the importance of necessities...

sivamadhaviyam
23-Sep-2012 00:13 AM

Comment Superb! If there was no light, there would have been no life. Thus your lines have a very deep meaning.

V.K. Joshi
22-Sep-2012 23:48 PM

Comment How true!

Pavalamani Pragasam
22-Sep-2012 23:19 PM

Comment What a stunning poem, Rajender ji. A significant contribute to the mass about the subtle meaning of life that we are at some time guilty of grasping it earlier to live and mingle in bliss...

Keep penning...it's lovely ! Cheers.

Shaheen Sultan Dhanji
22-Sep-2012 22:40 PM

Comment Good one and truthful.

mahesh chandra dewedy
22-Sep-2012 22:30 PM

Comment So much truth in this well crafted piece Rajender!

Sandra martyres
22-Sep-2012 21:55 PM

Comment nice creation.

sagar
22-Sep-2012 20:23 PM


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