Theme: Love

Beyond My Control

by Dr. Jaipal Singh
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Sometimes I have this feeling
We were destined to meet for sure
A bond of friendship was by choice
But loving you so madly during life,
Was beyond my control or imagination.

Sometimes I have this feeling
Giving and receiving affection and care
Gave a lot of strength and courage
But consequent longing for you lifelong,
Was beyond my control or imagination.

Sometimes I have this feeling
You were destined to part and go away
Leaving behind memories anyway
But the resultant suffering and pain,
Was beyond my control or imagination.
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24-Feb-2013

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Views: 1511     Comments: 6

Comments on this Poem

Comment Dear kulbir Ji,

On the contrary, I really liked your quatrain...

And you have every right, and in fact welcome, to even criticize or point out shortcomings, if any, in my writings.

Regards,
Jaipal

jairathore
26-Feb-2013 23:16 PM

Comment Dear Jai Sahib,

Your poem was perfecto to start with - who am I to finish it?

Please don't mind the verse I wrote - it just came to me.

Thanks!

Kulbir
26-Feb-2013 16:39 PM

Comment Thank you so much, Rupradha Ji, for liking it.

jairathore
26-Feb-2013 08:50 AM

Comment Thank you so much, Kulbir Ji, for completing my incomplete poem...!

jairathore
26-Feb-2013 08:49 AM

Comment awesome Jai Ji!

Rupradha
26-Feb-2013 06:19 AM

Comment Sometimes I have this feeling
Your love is healing
Everything wrong with me,
If you could see...

kulbirbhalla
24-Feb-2013 11:27 AM


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