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Theme: Dream

Illusion

You came like a strong wind,
Blew me away like dust.
Far from the ground of reality
Above the clouds,
I was gliding like a balloon
Filled with joy.
Never knew how time passed by.

I woke up in rain.
From the sky
As I fall along with the water drop
Hitting hard on the surface of ground,
I can't see you around.
I loved my dream.
But I don't want to sleep again.

06-May-2013

More By  :  Kingshuk Chakraborty

Views: 1425     Comments: 5

Comments on this Poem

Comment Thanks to all of you.............it's pleasure to know that you liked it. Warm regards....

kingshuk
07-May-2013 23:50 PM

Comment Up and down with the ups and downs...effectively depicted.

Madhavi
07-May-2013 08:45 AM

Comment Up and down with the ups and downs...effectively depicted.

Madhavi
07-May-2013 08:38 AM

Comment Good poem - sad but true - that's life!

Kulbir
07-May-2013 07:48 AM

Comment Good imagination.Thank you.

Nathmal Sharma
07-May-2013 07:27 AM


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