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Theme: Senryu


cricket bat and ball
hitting out at each other


More By  :  Padmaja Iyengar-Paddy

Views: 1088     Comments: 5

Comments on this Poem

Comment Thank you Kingshukji for seeing the intended layers.

Padmaja Iyengar
11-May-2013 08:41 AM

Comment Wow......I can see many faces in that bat and ball! Wonderful!

11-May-2013 00:13 AM

Comment Hi Rupradha / Kulbir - it's either Padmaja or Paddy (better still). Thanks for liking. Yes, Kulbir's lines are lovely. Only I write for the pure p[leasure of writing - fame, name if they come (seems doubtful in this lifetime), will be incidental. And yes, love cricket.

Padmaja Iyengar
10-May-2013 14:53 PM

Comment wonderful lines..so humorous..both you, Mam & Kulbir ji..

10-May-2013 14:31 PM

Comment Padmajaji,

You love the game -
Hope cricket
is your ticket
To fortune and fame!

10-May-2013 10:42 AM

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