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Theme: Longing

Without You

Without you,
This moment haunts;
Without you,
This moment drags;
Without you,
This moment taunts;
Without you,
This moment nags.


More By  :  Kulbir Bhalla

Views: 1420     Comments: 6

Comments on this Poem

Comment Beautiful!

17-May-2013 23:14 PM

Comment Nathmalji,

Thank you so much for your appreciation - I'm at a loss for words!

14-May-2013 16:21 PM

Comment Who can behave as frank as him.
For,he always does nice to bestir.
Sometime he completely joined,
And sometime he remains partir.
Only the sky has itself no means,
Without lightening & cloud's whir.
I can definitely say onething that,
Is prosperity of poetry,without Kulbir ?

Nathmal Sharma
14-May-2013 14:46 PM

Comment Padmaja & Rupradhaji,

Without you,
What will I do?

My thanks,
My thanks!

14-May-2013 10:35 AM

Comment without you
this moment is incomplete
without you
this moment can never be sweet..
your poem is as usual amazing!

14-May-2013 10:32 AM

Comment Very nice! Loved it! Thanks for sharing Kulbir.

Padmaja Iyengar
14-May-2013 09:53 AM

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