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A Moment With You

A moment with you
Is all I get -
A moment with you
Which you can bet
Makes my day
Surprisingly sublime,
And for it I pray
Time after time.

A moment with you
Is beyond description;
A moment with you
Is the perfect prescription
For this soul of mine -
Our hearts meet
And our eyes align -
How romantic and sweet!

A moment with you
Makes life worthwhile;
A moment with you,
When your divine smile
Puts a song in my heart,
Which I replay all day
So we aren't apart,
Come what may.


More By  :  Kulbir Bhalla

Views: 1353     Comments: 8

Comments on this Poem

Comment Nathmalji,

A moment with you is always a pleasure - to read your wise words and warm thoughts - my gratitude.

09-Jul-2013 13:15 PM

Comment Please see the effect of this one moment's meeting that a man begins to walk on the path of adventure.He wins his target or goal.He is encouraged
himself whole of the time to do something difficult & tough actions.
To meet of a moment is very astonishing.Very effective.This moment will
fruitful to you.I hope so.Thank you very much to give importance this
marvellous moment.Please also read the comment on"A human Being".A
lot of thanks.

Nathmal Sharman
08-Jul-2013 22:06 PM

Comment Rupradhaji and Nathmalji,

Thank you for your kind words of appreciation. Yes, our friendship will never end!

29-Jun-2013 09:00 AM

Comment Lovely poem with a great passion ! Thank you.

Nathmal Sharma
28-Jun-2013 13:44 PM

Comment hmmmmmm!! :-)
excellent!! mind blowing..

a moment with you
I love to spend..
hope our friendship
shall never end..

rupradha mookerjee
28-Jun-2013 12:49 PM

Comment Kingshukji and Jaipalji,

Thank you so much for your appreciation and wishes.

28-Jun-2013 07:51 AM

Comment Excellent! Have blissful moments with your 'you'.

28-Jun-2013 00:51 AM

Comment So sweet!

27-Jun-2013 23:16 PM

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