Feeling

by Dr. Madhavi Godavarthy

Your face
On mine
Your breath
With mine
Lips locked in silence
Just the rhythmic strokes
Of the eye liner
In your deft hands
On my lashes
Thank you my beautician!

11-Jul-2013

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Comments on this Poem

Thank you for liking it Padmaja jee.

madhavi-godavarthy
15-Jul-2013 10:01 AM

The poem offers so many possibilities till the anti climax :-)))
Nice one Dr. Godavarthy.

Padmaja Iyengar
15-Jul-2013 09:49 AM

Thank you Rupradha jee.

madhavi
12-Jul-2013 05:30 AM

mind blowing..

Rupradha
11-Jul-2013 13:15 PM

Thank you Mr Kingshuk for liking this'mystery'.

madhavi
11-Jul-2013 10:57 AM

The skill of the beautician was acknowledged by you. I acknowledge here your skill of using words so beautifully in unfolding the mystery of the Beautician at the end. Simply Wow!

kingshuk
11-Jul-2013 06:45 AM