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Theme: Control

Desire and Fear

Watch it, brother!
Desire and fear
Live very near
To each other.

Desire to add,
Fear of loss,
Become your boss:
Both are bad.

Desire and fear
Take a toll,
So exercise control
When they appear.


More By  :  Kulbir Bhalla

Views: 1431     Comments: 6

Comments on this Poem

Comment Nathmalji,

You are most welcome!

14-Aug-2013 16:35 PM

Comment Good advice.Thank you,Bhalla Ji.

Nathmal Sharma
14-Aug-2013 13:16 PM

Comment Rupradhaji, Padmaja and Jai Sahib,

My gratitude for your appreciation.

06-Aug-2013 15:15 PM

Comment A good advice, indeed.

06-Aug-2013 05:55 AM

Comment Excellent analysis of desire and fear. A very well written poem, Kulbir. Appreciations.

Padmaja Iyengar
06-Aug-2013 00:07 AM

Comment so true..wonderfully written..

05-Aug-2013 23:40 PM

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