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Theme: Friendship

Fear

I am not immune 
to doubt or fear, 
when all seemed dark 
nothing made sense, 
my soul cried
in fright 
and begged for comfort. 
 
Unable to explain, 
confused, 
I dropped my eyes 
and stood still, 
in total silence. 
 
Until I found you 
my friend, 
the one that understood all... 
Who smiled, 
just held my hand, 
walked with me, 
never breaking 
my silence, 
to ask 
why... 

09-Aug-2013

More By  :  Pili Pubul

Views: 1412     Comments: 4

Comments on this Poem

Comment Very meaningful comment, thank you so much Nathmat.

pilipubul
11-Aug-2013 20:00 PM

Comment Very heart touching and realistic lines.Thank you Mam.

Nathmal Sharma
11-Aug-2013 15:18 PM

Comment My gratitude to you Rupratha for reading my work and great comment

pilipubul
10-Aug-2013 18:20 PM

Comment excellent..

Rupradha
10-Aug-2013 15:38 PM


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