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Thanks a lot Pradeep Nair for your generous words of appreciation..
Elated..
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It is a cumbersome task....
to escape and run away from the memories..
the sweeter ones cherish along..
while the bitter ones haunt ..
let it be bad or good...
memories are a part of us...
without them, we are dead..
without us... they too...
there is a grandeur in every line...
Beautiful..
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Thanks Yuvraj Sanap :)
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outstanding...
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Thanks Padmaja Ji for words of appreciation .
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Memories do have a habit of holding one in their vice grip - here you have chosen to hold on to memories - chosen to be locked up by memories...Excellent wordplay that at once tugs at the heart strings! Well done, Mohiniji.
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Thanks Adya for your heartfelt comments .
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teacher seriously heart touching. really inspired readings all your poems......
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Thanks Nilesh for your comments .
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heart touching
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Thanks a lot Dr Zinia Mitra Ma'am for understanding how people get trapped in memories. Your generous comments mean a lot to me.
I am honoured and motivated to write more. Thanks.
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People are trapped by memories.
Very nicely expressed.
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Thanks a lot Dr Jaydeep Sarangi sir for your generous comments they mean a lot to me. A Great Poet's comments inspire another poet to write more. Truely motivated to continue writing . I am honoured . Thank you :)
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The poem is meditative. There prevails the art of life...wishes,
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Thanks Dr Vaibhav Sabnis for understanding the heart touching emotions. Thanks for your generous comments . For sure motivated to write more . :)
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What a poem! Heart-touching emotions garbed in superb language.
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Thanks Rajeev Sharma for your generous comments. Yes for sure you all will be locked in my memories forever .Thanks :)
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Lucked in Memory is an Eternal Poem composed by Mohini Mam, and it will be united with us Today,Tomorrow and always...Purely Nostalgic...
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Thanks Uttam Guru for your honest comments . Sometimes I feel less is more in poetry . Good suggestions to be pondered upon. Thanks :)
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Two images--that of a creeper "entangling me/deeper and deeper with its strong hold" and the other of a locked chamber of memories--are really good. But, I also think that you could have done better by extending the first one for a while for better effects. Overall, good!
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Thanks Baliram Gaikwad sir for your generous and motivational comments. They mean a lot to me. I am honoured . Your comments truely inspire me to write more. Thank you for your kind support..... Mohini
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Thanks Sayantan Ji , Dr Kanade, Meenakshi, Sanjay Shinde, Susanta Biswas , sanjay sanap , Raju mote and Rupradha for your generous comments. I feel great and honoured to see your comments and for sure they motivate me to write more. Thanks for your continuous support .Thank you .
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A beautiful, touching poem.
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nice poem
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Dear Friend Mohini,
Congratulations!! I was unaware about the poetic dimension of your personality!!
'Locked in Memories' beautifully unlocks the chocked voice from the past and unloads the heavy burden of dear memories.
Keep it up. Congratulations again.
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Congretulation............................... Proud feeling.....................
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Congrats !
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beautiful written mohini tr waiting for more like tis
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This is one part of life which is never die,
Very Nice Thought Mohini ........
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OUTSTANDING
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beautifully scripted..harsh reality of life is that memories never leave us, people of whom the memories are built do!
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