Theme: Nature

I Wish I Were A Cloud



Gazing at the cloud I too desire to become one
Would sail like a wanderer to help the needy ones.
I wish to shower on the drought prone areas
to spread greenery on farms and joy to each one.

Care is taken to see
that I am not the cause
for disaster
like Uttarakhand.
Disheartening are the false allegations
made by man, the disasters are results
of their own activities
leading to global warming and sliding of land.

I desire to make the children happy with my drizzle
Would love to see them dance and hear them whistle.
I wish to sail all over my country
to quench people's thirst.
As my happiness lies in their blessings
and never wish to be cursed.

Would like to come down from heaven to earth
to stop exploitation of Mother Earth  
Earnest desire to see her evergreen, happy and filled with mirth.
   

09-Aug-2013

More By  :  Mohini Gurav

Views: 1452     Comments: 24

Comments on this Poem

Comment Thanks a lot Gopal Lahiri sir . Its a great honour for me to receive compliments from a great poet like you . Elated. Thanks .

Mohini Gurav
13-Jun-2014 02:14 AM

Comment a delightful read as always. Mohini, Keep it up.

gopal
08-Jun-2014 11:11 AM

Comment a delightful read as always. Mohini, Keep it up.

gopal
08-Jun-2014 11:11 AM

Comment Thanks Angana Dutta for your kind words of appreciation . Elated thanks :)

Mohini Gurav
13-Dec-2013 05:54 AM

Comment It takes the reader to a flight to rejuvenating fantasy.. it also expresses the noble soul that you are within. Beautiful creation... thank you for sharing :-)

Angana Dutta
11-Nov-2013 02:20 AM

Comment Thanks Pradeep Nair for sharing your views . Thanks for your generous words of compliments. Elated ...Thanks a lot.

Mohini Gurav
17-Oct-2013 22:54 PM

Comment Despite of age, culture and race...., everyone of us like to become a cloud... we are filled with fathomless worries and baggage of life... would love to be lighter than air and fly above like a cloud....

and by flying so, if we could provide a drop of solace to someone, it would be something godly.

this work is very much contemporary and addressing so many arenas. I really enjoyed it. thank you...

Pradeep S Nair
16-Oct-2013 14:43 PM

Comment Thanks Padmaja ji for kind words of appreciation ! Thanks for liking the visual image which truely has added meaning to my poem which was an extended generous help given to me by
Dr Rajender sir.Thanks to sir too.

mohinigurav
05-Oct-2013 23:20 PM

Comment Just one word - lovely! And a great accompanying visual! Thanks for sharing Mohiniji.

Padmaja Iyengar
03-Oct-2013 14:59 PM

Comment Thanks Sunanda for your generous comments . Your comments means a lot to me. Thank you dear .

Mohini Gurav
02-Sep-2013 09:43 AM

Comment very nice your poem is like your thoughts which are reflecting like a mirror in your words .

sunanda khandare
02-Sep-2013 05:52 AM

Comment Thanks Rajeev Sharma for understanding the condolence message. You are right I would love to see the wonderful creation of God THE MOTHER EARTH filled with love and mirth. Earnest desire to see Nature and Man in harmony. Thanks :)

mohinigurav
17-Aug-2013 01:24 AM

Comment This poem is full of care and love for Humanity...and condolence.
nice...one

RAJEEV SHARMA
17-Aug-2013 00:17 AM

Comment Thanks Sachin , Jagdish ji and Raju mote sir for all your generous comments . I am honoured . Your comments mean a lot to me. Thanks :)

mohinigurav
16-Aug-2013 14:00 PM

Comment Thanks Pradnya dear for your comments . Yes you inspire me to write more . Thanks :)

mohinigurav
16-Aug-2013 13:46 PM

Comment Very nice..
Keep it up..
Wish to read more..
:) (y)

Pradnya Shete Pawar
16-Aug-2013 13:31 PM

Comment Very nice! A good message Mohini ji!

Jagdish Keshav
16-Aug-2013 13:10 PM

Comment very nice

Raju Mote
16-Aug-2013 02:01 AM

Comment Very contemporary!! Good...

Sachin
15-Aug-2013 23:55 PM

Comment Thanks Rupradha, Sayanta ji , Sanjay ji and Baliram Gaikwad sir for your generous and motivational comments. I am honoured and truely inspired to write more.... Mohini .

manya
15-Aug-2013 13:50 PM

Comment A good poem with a clear message

Sayantan Gupta
15-Aug-2013 09:10 AM

Comment Beautiful mind

Sanjay Sanap
15-Aug-2013 07:33 AM

Comment Soft blending of romanticism and realism!! Congrats!!

Baliram Gaikwad
14-Aug-2013 16:27 PM

Comment extremely nice..

Rupradha
14-Aug-2013 10:57 AM


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