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Theme: Lover


Drinking rain, 
inebriating my being 
with strong aromas 
of damp hearth, 
I give myself to you 
Mother nature. 
By your nurturing 
I exist. 
My body drenched 
I am in your power 
as your seas and mountains 
creatures crawling 
in almost imperceptible motion, 
absorbing nectar 
and essence. 
Your truth 
marking time 
at inflexible rhythm. 
I shall be under you 
as a lover, 
hold me forever in your 
eternal evolution. 
Embracing life... as I die.   


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Comments on this Poem

Comment I am deeply moved and humbled by your extraordinary comments my poet friend Nathmal. Thank you so very much and wish you too a long and happy life.

08-Sep-2013 11:58 AM

Comment You are true lover of nature.Your poetry reproduces something splendid from depth of your thoughtfulness.So it assembles a variety of nice images,similies and beautiful word pictures spontaneously. You also blend your practical experience as well as imagination to make rich your poetry,And now it has reached beyond the thinking of an ordinary person.I can say ,It is Superb poetry for eternity ! It is a full of long lived experiences & great combination of pure hearted fluency! I salute your wisdom.God always bless you for a long & happy life.Thank you very much for your continuous
writings.Again a lot of thanks,Mam.

Nathmal Sharma
08-Sep-2013 11:00 AM

Comment Thank you very much Kingshuk.

29-Aug-2013 07:04 AM

Comment Beautifully expressed..!!

29-Aug-2013 01:25 AM

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