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Theme: Gratitude

My Thanks

I glimpsed heaven on earth
In your smile,
Radiating mirth
In a divine style.

I watched the sun rise
In your eyes,
Promising a day
Bright and gay.

I saw the moon glowing
In your face -
What bliss it was bestowing
With its grace!

I felt the universe rock
In your walk,
Going the distance
Celebrating its existence.

I heard a nightingale singing
In your laughter -
What joy it was bringing
For hours thereafter!

20-Sep-2013

More By  :  Kulbir Bhalla

Views: 1373     Comments: 8

Comments on this Poem

Comment Bhaskaranandji and Jai Sahib,

My gratitude for your appreciation.

Kulbir
21-Sep-2013 12:15 PM

Comment A very nice poem, Kulbirji.

jairathore
21-Sep-2013 08:34 AM

Comment thanks a lot Padmaja Mam..

Rupradha
20-Sep-2013 13:40 PM

Comment too appreciable!!!

Bhaskaranand Jha Bhaskar
20-Sep-2013 13:38 PM

Comment Padmaja,

Glad to know you enjoyed it - thanks!

kulbirbhalla
20-Sep-2013 13:34 PM

Comment Much enjoyed this romantic poem from you as also Ru's feedback poem :-) Great !

Padmaja Iyengar
20-Sep-2013 13:25 PM

Comment Rupradhaji,

Thank you so much for your loving appreciation - glad you liked it.

kulbirbhalla
20-Sep-2013 10:42 AM

Comment After reading your poem, mind blowing,
I could see the writer's face glowing,
What sweetness it is pouring,
In bliss the readers are soaring!

Rupradha
20-Sep-2013 10:10 AM


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