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Theme: Balance


Well is a kiln
Upside down,
One smokes away in sky
The other weeps deep down.
Going up or down
Does not matter
As long as you don’t choke in joy
Or drown in grief.


More By  :  Hafeez ur Rehman

Views: 1401     Comments: 2

Comments on this Poem

Comment Both works help life.One help build shelter for it,the other provides water to live.Both are result of human effort.And you know,whatever humans create,it gives back alienation.Your poem is depiction of it.Nice work.

Muhammad Azeem
26-Sep-2013 06:29 AM

Comment Splendid!

25-Sep-2013 18:23 PM

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