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Theme: Rhyming

Rains



rains pitter patter
on shaking leaves they clatter
croaking frogs chatter

26-Oct-2013

More By  :  Padmaja Iyengar-Paddy

Views: 1428     Comments: 7

Comments on this Poem

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Thanks, Dear Friends, for liking the picture :-)

alwaysaparna
28-Oct-2013 10:54 AM

Comment I am fully wet......both words and visual brought the monsoon back. Excellent......thank you for sharing Padmaja and Aparnaji..

kingshuk
28-Oct-2013 03:30 AM

Comment Thanks a ton Nathmalji for your generous appreciation. Indeed, Aparnaji's thoughtful embellishment of this poem with an apt visual has made all the difference and has enhanced the impact of my simple poem. Thank you both too Kulbir and Ru for liking this one.

Padmaja Iyengar
27-Oct-2013 11:35 AM

Comment Sweet!

Kulbir
27-Oct-2013 06:10 AM

Comment mind blowing..

Rupradha
27-Oct-2013 05:01 AM

Comment Nice poem.The image has also made the poem so beautiful that I can say it a forever green phenomena of nature.Surely the words created by you fulfil
the sound of situation.Selection of appropriate words,use of colours and profundity of thoughts,all make the rhythm of poem vivid and fascinating. Even though I am not a good commentator yet I can feel your emotions from
a long distance.Thank you Mam.Again a lot of thanks to both of you,the
editor and the creator.I wish to put this image on my table.I insist a poet to write a poem,He or She must essentially think upon,what is the practical use
of it.You have succeeded hundred percent in your aim to write this poem as
well as Aparna Ji for supporting a nice image.Thousand of thanks to Mam Square.Sometimes we get an amazing pleasure through your creations.


Nathmal Sharma
27-Oct-2013 00:10 AM

Comment Much appreciate your gesture Aparnaji, in having presented this poem with a superb visual. Thanks a ton :-).

Padmaja Iyengar
26-Oct-2013 12:53 PM


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