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A Cloud To Ride



A cloud to ride
Someday for me,
With you by my side
So we can see
This beautiful earth
Day and night,
And share some mirth,
In sunlight and moonlight.

A cloud to ride,
That's my plea,
So we can glide,
Just you and me,
Over mountains and oceans
To fulfill a dream:
Pamper our emotions,
And see our eyes gleam.

A cloud to ride
Somewhere for me,
So we can hide,
If you agree,
And spend some time
Getting to know
Our creator sublime,
And His splendid show.

30-Oct-2013

More By  :  Kulbir Bhalla

Views: 1443     Comments: 9

Comments on this Poem

Comment Excellent...

parthap ratim banerjee
07-Nov-2013 10:38 AM

Comment Excellent...

parthap ratim banerjee
07-Nov-2013 10:38 AM

Comment Happy Diwali Aparna Mam & everyone on Boloji! :)

Rupradha
04-Nov-2013 12:51 PM

Comment
Welcome, Kulbir Ji

Happy Diwali to you and everyone on Boloji :-)

alwaysaparna
02-Nov-2013 06:16 AM

Comment wonderful play of words..this poem is a cloud to ride.. :)

Rupradha
01-Nov-2013 15:32 PM

Comment Aparnaji, Anjana, Kingshukji & Padmaja,

Thank you all for your appreciation.

kulbirbhalla
01-Nov-2013 07:54 AM

Comment As ethereal as the clouds and what a journey to seek! Kudos Kulbir!

Padmaja Iyengar
01-Nov-2013 06:21 AM

Comment Loved the words flow...........enjoyed reading.

kingshuk
31-Oct-2013 12:36 PM

Comment So sweet and soothing....

Anjana Bhalla
31-Oct-2013 11:18 AM


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