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Thanks to You,
And what You do,
This moment of time
Is truly sublime.
I celebrate my birth
On planet earth,
And get to see
What You do for me.
I do my duty:
I view Thy beauty,
And sing Thy song
All day long.
I see Thy show:
It continues to glow;
One of a kind,
It boggles my mind.
How do You do
What You do?
How do You command
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Nathmalji,
Glad to know that you got promoted, and you broke your silence after five months.
I very much appreciate your appreciation. I am so glad my words resonate with you. I try to express my thoughts as simply as possible, and as briefly as possible.
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I was busy for several months in preparation of my subject's new content matter .Because I was promoted on the post of lecturer in English in the month, July 2013.I always love Hindi.Though I am not good at English,yet it happened.It means God
wants me to do more hard labour in English subject.I think,it will be fruitful to me to compose poetry.
Really your this poem attracted me too much,and after five months my silence was broken.It is only
miracle of your words that effected me very much and I couldn't stop myself to praise your expressive emotions.A lot of thanks for praiseworthy poem on
God.Thank you very much Kulbir Ji.
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Jai Sahib & Bhaskaranandji,
Thank you so much for finding beauty in the poem - my gratitude.
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Wonderful poetry!!! Wonderful thought well presented via beauty of of words!!!!:) Touched me a lot... both ideas and diction. and of course the style!!! thanks so much... All the best..
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A good poem and good rhyme, Kulbirji.
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Rupradhaji, Nathmalji & Anjanaji,
My gratitude to you all for your appreciation.
Nathmalji, where have you been, and how have you been?
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Even appreciating God and His bountiful blessings is by His Grace.
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Even appreciating God and His bountiful blessings is by His Grace.
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Your gratitude for God is appreciable.Nice emotions.Nice lines.Thank you
very much.
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excellent..power of God is enormous..many thanks for realizing this..
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