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Theme: Lonesome


The travelling fog
Comes and kisses
The old man out for
A slow morning walk,
Startling him completely
By the cold breath;
Like that hurried peck
Given years ago,
By a forgetful son
Before he departed forever for
The seductive United States,
Never came back.


More By  : Dr. Sunil Sharma

Views: 1377     Comments: 5

Comments on this Poem

Comment Thanks bro Rob Harle and Padmaja

Sunil Sharma
05-Mar-2014 07:57 AM

Comment An excellently penned and moving poem that states a harsh fact in a gentle way!

Padmaja Iyengar
05-Mar-2014 07:14 AM

Comment Nice poem, very close to the bone.

Rob Harle
04-Mar-2014 12:43 PM

Comment Thanks a lot Rupradha.

Sunil Sharma
04-Mar-2014 08:05 AM

Comment it is mind blowing, so touchy, gave me goose bumps..

04-Mar-2014 05:22 AM

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