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Theme: Love

What Would I See?

What would I see
Inside your heart -
A soft corner for me,
So I don't fall apart?

20-May-2014

More By  :  Kulbir Bhalla

Views: 1404     Comments: 7

Comments on this Poem

Comment Sir,You can delete previous comment.Sometimes it happens due to
sudden stopage or disturbance of internet.So it is requested
that two comments are unnecessary.Remove one of them.Thanks.

Nathmal Sharma
07-Jun-2014 04:08 AM

Comment Nathmalji,

My gratitude to you for your heartwarming appreciation. You are always so kind and appreciative.

kulbirbhalla
22-May-2014 11:28 AM

Comment Kulbir Ji,You are a pure hearted person for all.You always feel love for others either it may male or female or any other creature.You easily recognize the emotions of other's heart.So you are a good poet who is aware for soft corner of others,who feels their
cheerfulness as well as their sorrows.This quality makes you a differernt person from others.Even though you wrote upon your love partner yet I
have found a glimpse of universal love in your expression.What a nice person you are ! You can't think .God bless you.Thank you.Aap Rab di chhabi dekhte hein sab mein.

Nathmal Sharma
22-May-2014 11:09 AM

Comment Kulbir Ji,You are a pure hearted person for all.You always feel love for others either it may male or female or any other creature.You easily recognize the emotions of other's heart.So you are a good poet who is aware for soft corner of others,who feels their
cheerfulness as well as their sorrows.This quality makes you a differernt person from others.Even though you wrote upon your love partner yet I
have found a glimpse of universal love in your expression.What a nice person you are ! You can't think .God bless you.Thank you.

Nathmal Sharma
22-May-2014 11:04 AM

Comment Jaipal Sahib & Rupradhaji,

My gratitude for your appreciation.

kulbirbhalla
21-May-2014 15:23 PM

Comment wow!!

Rupradha
21-May-2014 06:47 AM

Comment Nice quatrain, Kulbirji.

jaipalsingh
21-May-2014 00:15 AM


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