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Theme: Depression

Still Life...

I see without seeing,
I feel without feeling,
I think but there is no thought,
All my actions come to naught.
 
My vision seems to have no focus.
Life seems like some hocus pocus,
Headed in no particular direction,
And lost in a maze of abstraction.
 
Have I become a still life?
Or is there still some life?

29-May-2014

More By  :  Padmaja Iyengar-Paddy

Views: 1414     Comments: 9

Comments on this Poem

Comment Thanks Madhavi!

Padmaja Iyengar
04-Jun-2014 15:11 PM

Comment Wonderful!

madhavi-godavarthy
02-Jun-2014 10:08 AM

Comment Thank you all so much for liking this one and your appreciation, Kulbir, Kingshuk and AA.

Padmaja Iyengar
30-May-2014 07:51 AM

Comment Beautiful!

AA
30-May-2014 04:27 AM

Comment Lovely!

kingshuk
29-May-2014 14:26 PM

Comment Padmaja,

Profound thought!

Kulbir
29-May-2014 12:47 PM

Comment Thanks Dr. Mallick for seeing hmour in this one and bringing on a smile on my face:-) Thanks for liking this one, dear Ru.

Padmaja Iyengar
29-May-2014 12:01 PM

Comment grand one!!

Rupradha
29-May-2014 08:44 AM

Comment Witty composition, Padmaja. There is a layer of humour in the sorrow. There is still life!

Kumarendra Mallick
29-May-2014 07:44 AM


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