Words Unsaid

by Dr. Kumarendra Mallick

the train puffs off --
the words we couldn't say
stretch between us

01-Jun-2014

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Comments on this Poem

Thank you, Nathmal ji for your candid words of appreciation. I feel deeply touched.

Kumarendra Mallick
10-Jun-2014 23:21 PM

Sir,You are really a skilful word painter.This poem is witnessed your genius.I salute your art.A lot of thanks.

Nathmal Sharma
10-Jun-2014 09:25 AM

Thank you, Madhavi. Do you remember a movie song, 'Meri baat rahi mere manmei, kuch kahan saki uljhanomei...' (My words remained in my mind, couldn't express in a huff...)

kumarendramallick
02-Jun-2014 10:11 AM

So well-expressed Dr Mallik!

Madhavi
02-Jun-2014 08:10 AM

Yes, Rupa. Thank you for your 'moving' response. Often the heart carries many an unspoken word.

kumarendramallick
01-Jun-2014 23:27 PM

wonderful..seems like a movie scene..

Rupradha
01-Jun-2014 12:36 PM

Thank you, Gopal ji for your prompt response. I feel rewarded.

kumarendramallick
01-Jun-2014 09:18 AM

A delightful read.

gopal
01-Jun-2014 09:15 AM