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Theme: Silence

Words Unsaid

the train puffs off --
the words we couldn't say
stretch between us


More By  : Dr. Kumarendra Mallick

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Comments on this Poem

Comment Thank you, Nathmal ji for your candid words of appreciation. I feel deeply touched.

Kumarendra Mallick
10-Jun-2014 23:21 PM

Comment Sir,You are really a skilful word painter.This poem is witnessed your genius.I salute your art.A lot of thanks.

Nathmal Sharma
10-Jun-2014 09:25 AM

Comment Thank you, Madhavi. Do you remember a movie song, 'Meri baat rahi mere manmei, kuch kahan saki uljhanomei...' (My words remained in my mind, couldn't express in a huff...)

02-Jun-2014 10:11 AM

Comment So well-expressed Dr Mallik!

02-Jun-2014 08:10 AM

Comment Yes, Rupa. Thank you for your 'moving' response. Often the heart carries many an unspoken word.

01-Jun-2014 23:27 PM

Comment wonderful..seems like a movie scene..

01-Jun-2014 12:36 PM

Comment Thank you, Gopal ji for your prompt response. I feel rewarded.

01-Jun-2014 09:18 AM

Comment A delightful read.

01-Jun-2014 09:15 AM

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