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Theme: Realization


Unable to decide
if it was right or wrong
to have shouted at the maid
she speaks to the mirror.
"Look at her eyes", he says
wherein lies the answer 
rather this lifeless glass
that reflects your rage.


More By  :  Pankajam K

Views: 1405     Comments: 4

Comments on this Poem

Comment Effect well-brought out. Thank you.

14-Jun-2014 00:43 AM

Comment An everyday dilemma very well aritculated! But maids being maids, don't spare us, do they? :-) Great write, Pankajam.

Padmaja Iyengar
10-Jun-2014 09:13 AM

Comment Nice.

10-Jun-2014 00:33 AM

Comment It is great dilemma for me Aparna ji that writer is she or he ? At the time of writing comment personal pronoun are used.So it is very much confusional
thing about name of a writer that Is that person a male or female? So please it should be essentially made to mention their gender in their introduction.
In above poem dilemma is described about
irritating upon someone which is contained in human nature.A lot of thanks sharing personal
experience Sir or Mam.(I do not know who are you.
So I am terribly sorry about this dilemma.)Heartly
very sorry.

Nathmal Sharma
09-Jun-2014 21:50 PM

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