Theme: Admiration

An Eternal Song

Your angelic aura and your fairy charm
They made me a prisoner of a time warp
Countless days and nights have passed
Since we parted from rendezvous last.
 
Your so soft-spoken reassuring words
Rebound in my ears like a hymnal tune
The sublime fragrance of your breath
I feel in the surrounding vibrant air
The echo of your retreating footsteps
I can still hear even today from afar.
Your angelic aura…
 
Sunshine reminds me of your perfection
In the moonlight I see your reflection
I wish it was always a naive spring
Harsh winter never came in the offing
As if you were with me, my companion
Till a short while ago but now gone.
Your angelic aura…
 
My feeble heart is as ever yearning
Somewhere a shehnai is gently playing
In my restless solitude I’m still waiting
For the moment you’ll come out of hiding
We are co-travelers of an eternal journey
The truth can’t be denied even by eternity.
Your angelic aura…

25-Jul-2014

More By  : Dr. Jaipal Singh

Views: 1372     Comments: 7

Comments on this Poem

Comment Nice..much liked it.

anugrah
30-Jul-2014 02:10 AM

Comment No intention to cause trouble in already troubled waters, Rupradhaji:-)

jairathore
28-Jul-2014 12:05 PM

Comment Nathmal Ji, I am impressed with your touching yet philosophical review. I have my views but I leave it for some other occasion. Thanks a lot for appreciation.

Regards,

jairathore
28-Jul-2014 11:36 AM

Comment heart-wrenching..

Rupradha
28-Jul-2014 03:32 AM

Comment These lines show a deep enthusiasm for your eternal partner.It is said that a couple is settled in heaven by
God.After completion of His providing work,they return to God for next resposibility.In this way a circle continues in form of birth and death.Actually we are puppets of God's hands, as He wants us to be
danced, we dance and feel pleasure as well as griefs
both.Nothing can be done in this matter.We all depend God's mercy.You have written very heart touching plot in these lines which forces to think
someone on a very deep contemplation.A lot of thanks.Thank you very much for your good compostion,
Jaipal Singh Ji.

Nathmal Sharma
27-Jul-2014 10:08 AM

Comment Kulbirji,I'm glad you liked it.

jairathore
27-Jul-2014 00:20 AM

Comment Jaipal Sahib,

Very touching and poignant.

Kulbir
26-Jul-2014 11:39 AM


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