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Theme: God

I'd Love To Find

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I'd love to find
What was on Your mind,
What were You debating
When You were creating
Your grand master plan
For this universe and man,
This mind-boggling show
Which You started long ago.

I'd love to find
What's now on Your mind -
Would You agree
Once with me
That something is wrong,
And You can't go along
With the way man
Is ruining Your plan?

I'd love to find
If You'd change Your mind
And do something about
This situation, which no doubt,
Is getting out of hand;
Please take a stand
And awaken man -
You surely can!
Image © Kulbir - FotoArt International

23-Aug-2014

More By  :  Kulbir Bhalla

Views: 1448     Comments: 3

Comments on this Poem

Comment excellent poem & photo..

Rupz
02-Sep-2014 15:13 PM

Comment Jaipal Sahib,

I am glad you liked it. My gratitude for your appreciation.

Kulbir
25-Aug-2014 08:03 AM

Comment Kulbirji, you are aware of my likings of full length poems instead of those short ones of few words or lines so common these days, many of which perhaps create momentary impact and wane out. I liked this poem very much. My lot of felicitations and appreciations to you for this creation.

jaipalsingh
25-Aug-2014 03:49 AM


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