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Theme: Love

If You Could See

If you could see
You're in me;
I embrace your name
And I'm not the same.

Of you I'm thinking,
And with you I'm linking
All the time -
You're sublime.

Your presence I feel;
You quietly reveal
That we've a bond,
Here and beyond.

You're bestowing;
You're glowing,
Warming my heart;
We aren't apart.

You're giving
A reason for living,
And for what you do,
I humbly thank you.


More By  :  Kulbir Bhalla

Views: 1369     Comments: 6

Comments on this Poem

Comment Happy Birthday.May God bless you a long life.My pleasure.My gratitude.It is not necessary that we
shall meet from so long distance.But Rajendra
Krishan Ji & Aparna Ji have provided us a plateform
as a form of boloji,So we can express our heartily views for each other whenever we want.My ''Shukriya'' for both of them.A lot of thanks all of
you.Welcome of nice poetry,editing and supervision.

Nathmal Sharma
05-Feb-2015 13:03 PM

Comment Nathmalji,

Welcome back, and my gratitude for your heartwarming appreciation, and that also on my birthday (January 30) - you made my day!

05-Feb-2015 11:45 AM

Comment Really you are giving a reason for living.
Read,write & think something for doing.
Inspiration, love & brotherhood you give.
Your humanity, mercy,charity I conceive.
Fill colours in life & poems O! great artist,
Your works are your identity,fame isn''t far.
I can''t express,How nice person you are !
Your poetry is touchy, as innocent as dove.
I frequently read them,for I too much love.

Nathmal Sharma
30-Jan-2015 00:17 AM

Wonderful Writing, Kulbir Ji

Happy Sankranti :-)

14-Jan-2015 14:30 PM

Comment Aparnaji & Rupradhaji,

My gratitude for your appreciation - glad you liked it.

14-Jan-2015 09:29 AM

Comment outstanding!! How come you always manage to write in an amazing way that steal''s the reader''s heart!!

14-Jan-2015 08:50 AM

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