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Theme: Emptiness

A Void

There is an emptiness, a void,
No one can ever fill it, but you,
This loneliness I can't avoid,
As I can never live without you!


More By  :  Rupradha Mookerjee

Views: 1379     Comments: 10

Comments on this Poem

Comment To find "You" is a very difficult task because there are so many "you" and which "you" is suitable according to imagine of the viewer,we don't know.Only She or God knows the "you" of her dream.So emptiness is remained as usual as it
is.That is the problem.As I think,Rupradha Ji,
you can solve her riddle to get some relief.Thanks
a lot for heart touching &emotional picturesque.

Nathmal Sharma
08-Apr-2015 11:52 AM

Comment Where will find this "You" which is cause of this void ? But to get him,as I think,is a very difficult task.Beacuse there are so many "You" and which 'you' is suitable
according to imagine of the viewer,we don't know. Only She or God knows of her dream's "YOU".That
is the problem.So emptiness is remained as usual
as it is. Sorry ! Rupradhaji.Only you can solve this
riddle, so she may get relief.Thank you very much for writing a heart touching & emotional picturesque.

Nathmal Sharma
06-Apr-2015 13:43 PM

Comment thanks a lot Kulbir ji for your kind words..

30-Mar-2015 12:30 PM

Comment Rupradhaji,

Another gem from your kitty!

30-Mar-2015 08:49 AM

Comment thanks a bunch Paddy..

30-Mar-2015 08:43 AM

Comment 'Virah' so well and succinctly depicted, dear Ru! Great verse!

Padmaja Iyengar
30-Mar-2015 07:11 AM

Comment awwww thanks a lot Kumar ji..yes the photo is perfect..thanks again to Aparna Mam for her wonderful selection of images and also for liking this poem. :)

30-Mar-2015 06:56 AM

Comment thanks heaps Bhaskar ji..yes love has that magic..

30-Mar-2015 06:54 AM

Comment Your little poem carries the heavy weight of big emotioos! Great composition, dear Rupa. The illustration is too good!!

Kumarendra Mallick
30-Mar-2015 05:55 AM

Comment Beautiful piece on significance of love that fills up the void caused by loneliness.!

Bhaskar Jha
30-Mar-2015 05:10 AM

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