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Theme: Passion

Sublime Flame

Wintry sky with ruffled bloom
Wading the soul into sunless gloom
Nothing to light up the sunken spirit
Felt like wingless bird in a pit
Wafting clouds tore by a streak
Silver stream started to break
Came like a shower on parched earth
Castled me with coy countenance
Left in two minds all at once
Bartered smiles, inane utterance
Barricaded creeper crossing the fence
Unbridled passion flares into flame
Sucked into the vortex of sublime.


More By  :  N S Ramachandran

Views: 1342     Comments: 4

Comments on this Poem

Comment Thank you Narayananji for kind words.

19-Nov-2015 01:23 AM

Comment Excellent formation. Keep Going and would like to see more from you.

v. narayanan
17-Nov-2015 13:22 PM

Comment Thank you Jaipalsinghji for encouraging comments.

17-Nov-2015 06:06 AM

Comment Nice poem with equally nice rhyme.

16-Nov-2015 23:14 PM

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