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Theme: Gratitude

When I See You

When I see you,
I thank the one who
Stays beyond view,
Who made you.

He is your maker;
He is your source;
He is your caretaker;
He is your force.

He crafted your face
With extraordinary care;
He blessed it with grace,
And a beauty that's rare.

He made stars twinkle
In your wise eyes;
Mirth they sprinkle;
They never tell lies.

He bestowed a smile
That spreads cheer,
Making life worthwhile
For all those near.


More By  :  Kulbir Bhalla

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Comments on this Poem

Comment Aparnaji & Jaipal Sahib,

Thank you so much for your appreciation.

16-Jun-2016 09:49 AM

Comment Kulbirji, wonderful composition in admiration of the Creator and of course Her (whoever she is)...

Jaipal Singh
16-Jun-2016 08:51 AM

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