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Theme: Realization

Early Battle

Nearing victory,
just as I was about
to step out of bed,
I heard the sweetest

An entire verse,
an innate voice,
of a little olive bird.

So gentle,
that my mind gave up
its harshness,
and went back to sleep.


More By  :  Kenaz Chand

Views: 1453     Comments: 11

Comments on this Poem

Comment Lovely short poem! Taking us close to the nature.

Dipti Maini
15-Apr-2023 21:24 PM

Comment The morning tweetings of the bird are a wake up call while to others they are silky , soothing lullabies to make them sleep. What a wonder!
Lovely little poem!

Neera pradhan
12-Apr-2023 05:15 AM

Comment The morning tweeting of the bird is a wake up call to some and to others it lulls to sleep. What a wonder!
Lovely poem!

Neera pradhan
12-Apr-2023 05:09 AM

Comment Beautiful!

Melroy Valdeiro
11-Apr-2023 12:54 PM

Comment Simple,gentle n beautiful n calming.Absorbing oneself in nature is when u discover things that we don't get time to look n ponder upon.

Anjlee stephen
11-Apr-2023 02:44 AM

Comment Stupéfiant !

Satish Bendigiri.
10-Apr-2023 23:37 PM

Comment It so resonates with me!

Prof. Shubha Tiwari
10-Apr-2023 23:13 PM

Comment Good thoughts excellent wording awesome poem.Keep it moving bro.

Reuel Daniel Solomon
10-Apr-2023 22:48 PM

Comment A clear message ...superb


10-Apr-2023 22:32 PM

Comment We have forgotten to take notice of nature due to our busy lives but it still exists, calming the ones who still acknowledge it. Well written piece, Jazer.

10-Apr-2023 22:04 PM

Comment Simple, but deeply profound. Love it.

10-Apr-2023 18:33 PM

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