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Theme: Realization

Early Battle

Nearing victory,
just as I was about
to step out of bed,
I heard the sweetest
melody.

An entire verse,
an innate voice,
existence
of a little olive bird.

So gentle,
that my mind gave up
its harshness,
and went back to sleep.
 

07-Apr-2023

More By  :  Kenaz Chand

Views: 1453     Comments: 11

Comments on this Poem

Comment Lovely short poem! Taking us close to the nature.

Dipti Maini
15-Apr-2023 21:24 PM

Comment The morning tweetings of the bird are a wake up call while to others they are silky , soothing lullabies to make them sleep. What a wonder!
Lovely little poem!

Neera pradhan
12-Apr-2023 05:15 AM

Comment The morning tweeting of the bird is a wake up call to some and to others it lulls to sleep. What a wonder!
Lovely poem!

Neera pradhan
12-Apr-2023 05:09 AM

Comment Beautiful!

Melroy Valdeiro
11-Apr-2023 12:54 PM

Comment Simple,gentle n beautiful n calming.Absorbing oneself in nature is when u discover things that we don't get time to look n ponder upon.

Anjlee stephen
11-Apr-2023 02:44 AM

Comment Stupéfiant !

Satish Bendigiri.
10-Apr-2023 23:37 PM

Comment It so resonates with me!

Prof. Shubha Tiwari
10-Apr-2023 23:13 PM

Comment Good thoughts excellent wording awesome poem.Keep it moving bro.

Reuel Daniel Solomon
10-Apr-2023 22:48 PM

Comment A clear message ...superb

pckatoch

P C K PREM
10-Apr-2023 22:32 PM

Comment We have forgotten to take notice of nature due to our busy lives but it still exists, calming the ones who still acknowledge it. Well written piece, Jazer.

Jasper
10-Apr-2023 22:04 PM

Comment Simple, but deeply profound. Love it.

RK
10-Apr-2023 18:33 PM


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