Theme: Feelings

Calm Valley

When oppressed by fatigue
ready to give up,
you become
a gentle valley
of serenity.

I coil
over soft moss
where moist desires

I cling
to the warm landscape
of your strength.
in a velvet
blanket of love,
slowly my eyes close
like nocturnal flowers.


More By  :  Pili Pubul

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Comments on this Poem

Comment I love the beautiful metaphors with which you convey your sense of appreciation and gratitude to immortalise your loved one's unstinting care and concern for you. Wish you the best always.

21-Nov-2010 20:36 PM

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