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Theme: Fear

If You Leave

Solitary and still, looms darkness

Ears strain, capture shadowy noises

Sweet nothings to sleepy leafs, wind whispers

Withdrawn to my shelter, freezes me seclusion

Wearing, throbbing thoughts, pain of love bygone

Desirable may never again my world to you

Lost to me your charm, vibrant, exhilarating

Changed rhythm of my breath, your absence

Grazed memory, departed era keeps me warm

Turned to tear drops, refuge in my boundless distress

Desperately realized, I belong to you eternally

31-Jan-2011

More By  :  Suchithra Balan

Views: 1385     Comments: 2

Comments on this Poem

Comment WOW!

Rupradha
02-Feb-2011 21:09 PM

Comment Suchitra, the pang of separation does unite nor separate the loved one again. But the love trickles in the heart to an unknown destination. Nice composition.

kumarendramallick
01-Feb-2011 21:18 PM


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