A Pair of Senryu

by Jan Oscar Hansen

Waiter has no teeth
Works incredibly long hours
For new dentures

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In the park of lust
Two long cigarettes exhale
Fumes embrace softly

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Comments on this Poem

thank you hamerao

janoscarhansen
23-Oct-2013 08:55 AM

very nice.
"lips inhale nectar madly"
good thought

rpurushothamarao
23-Oct-2013 08:36 AM