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Thanks for compliments, malagaur.
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How sweet! A brilliant composition...
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Dear Rupradha ji, my sincere gratitude for your admiration though I am sceptic if the poem really deserves it; and please allow me to say that I see a real poet in many of your poems.
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Dr Kumarendra, thank you very much for compliments. Flight and migration of birds is indeed an intricate and interesting phenomenon. Recalling from my memory, I feel the spirit of poetry and poets is best narrated in 'The Victory' - one of the short stories of Gurudev Rabindranath Tagore.
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it's amazing Jaipal Ji!! What a longing!! What a fantastic composition and mixture of nature and love!! I hope that you have a glimpse of her soon!!
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Jaipal saheb, a good poem to remember the loved one. However, there is a small error. The birds fly back east-ward in the evening. Please watch the evening sky and the flight direction the home-coming birds. Thank you.
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