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Theme: Agony

The Journey of My Life

The rain of my eyes is so surging
That even the pillows get drenched,
The pain and the tears are so merging
As if my thirst for love is never quenched.

The journey of my life is so distressing,
That there is no chance of delight,
The chapters of my fate are so depressing,
As if happiness has taken its flight.

The boat of my hopes is so sinking,
That there is no escape from drowning,
The heartbeats and aches are so linking,
That every breath I take is downing!


More By  :  Rupradha Mookerjee

Views: 1352     Comments: 10

Comments on this Poem

Comment your words are so inspiring..thnks a lot Kulbirji

07-May-2013 02:07 AM

Comment Make this the past
Which didn't last,
And you can now
Smile somehow!

06-May-2013 08:54 AM

Comment Kingshuk ji, mind blowing lines..thank you so much.

05-May-2013 09:35 AM

Comment thanks a lot Jaipal ji. you are right..

05-May-2013 09:34 AM

Comment Beautiful heart when shines so bright,
Life would surely get touch of light.

04-May-2013 08:46 AM

Comment Rupradhaji, no wonder, many tend to relate a tragic narration as an author's own experience! The old story of 'A Painter and Bakery-woman' could be a good example. Although this may or may not be always true.. moreover everyone has to fight his/her battle of life in own ways!

jaipal singh
04-May-2013 03:23 AM

Comment thanks a lot all of you..

04-May-2013 02:16 AM

Comment You are a poetess of griefs , sorrows & pathetic love. Radha name is famous for relinquishment and separation.You have written too much about this. Now I wish to see you writing on hope and cheerfulness.Please try to do so.It will be your great achievement in the field of poetry.A lot of thanks for a dip into agony & write on heart touching compassion.

Nathmal Sharma
03-May-2013 13:24 PM

Comment Rupa, the heart of the lover is so sacred that God will never let is sink, and you shall have the nectar from a fairy's hand to quench your thirst. Move on with hope, dear friend.

Kumarendra Mallick
03-May-2013 08:58 AM

Comment Pathos and agony well expressed!

Padmaja Iyengar
03-May-2013 08:45 AM

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