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Theme: Birds

South Of The Border


South of the border
I’m dying to see;
South of the border
They flew without me.

Snow they skip
By taking a trip;
Searching for a snack,
Robins are back.



More By  :  Kulbir Bhalla

Views: 1353     Comments: 6

Comments on this Poem

Comment Rupradhaji, Jai Sahib and Nathmalji,

Thank you so much for liking it.

Jai Sahib, I'll let them know my passport is ready.

23-May-2013 17:43 PM

Comment Father & mother are here ,so need not to fear.
Little Robbins are in a good mood and cheer.
Ready food in beaks of parents,also too near.
Hungry children can't wait too much & bear.
Spring will come to soothe whole of sphere.
They look nice and seems related to sincere.
This family holds a short stay then disappear.
Only a deficiency, it can't obey Kulbir & adhere.

Nathmal Sharma
23-May-2013 04:08 AM

Comment Brilliant composition! May be next time they will take you along..

23-May-2013 03:48 AM

Comment totally agree with Padmaja ji..what a grand composition!

22-May-2013 02:25 AM

Comment Padmaja,

Thank you so much for your appreciation.

21-May-2013 14:36 PM

Comment I like the different ways, you are heralding and welcoming spring! Your poems on sparrows, squirrels and now the robins all amply demonstrate your love for nature. The photographer in you catches the images just right in different hues and moods...

Padmaja Iyengar
21-May-2013 08:08 AM

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