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Theme: Emotion


Hatred and cruelty
Came knocking
At the villa
Of my heart
Seeking room on rent
For sleeping and resting
My heart smiled and
Sorry, dear friends
Love and compassion
Have already occupied
All available space.
No accommodation
Is now available
For any dark knights!


More By  : Dr. Jaipal Singh

Views: 1385     Comments: 8

Comments on this Poem

Comment Nathmal Ji, it is almost impossible to completely get rid of the negative emotions but one can keep them at bay with application of wisdom and prudence. Thank you.

18-Aug-2013 05:01 AM

Comment Your positive thoughts have reflected here in the poem.Thank you Jaipal Singh Ji.

Nathmal Sharma
17-Aug-2013 14:17 PM

Comment Thank you, Kulbirji, I'm glad you liked it.

15-Aug-2013 03:33 AM

Comment Creative, and heartwarming!

13-Aug-2013 18:48 PM

Comment Thanks, Rupradhaji.

05-Aug-2013 09:56 AM

Comment Thank you so much, Padmaja ji, I'm happy you find this topical and of some use.

05-Aug-2013 09:55 AM

Comment very nice Jai Ji..

05-Aug-2013 02:20 AM

Comment Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem Jaipal Singh ji, that has great lessons for all of us, especially in these troubled times...

Padmaja Iyengar
04-Aug-2013 23:55 PM

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