Theme: Music

Strings and Bow



violin poised on the shoulder
chin resting gently
the delicate ribbon on the bow
barely touching the strings
stirring a tiny whisper
taking strength, rising
building up, pouring out
strong dainty tunes
overflowing, filling gaps...
seducing all senses,
spilling and spreading
condensed pain,
seeping through to the surface
in a trance of its own,
lost in the connection
of the bow, the ribbon, the strings...
trembling...tugging...
at the aching heart...the agonising soul...

01-Dec-2014

More By  :  Safiyyah Patel

Views: 1413     Comments: 2

Comments on this Poem

Comment The Violin's bow and strings, and music have been used as a great metaphors here to depict pain. Superb poem

Padmaja Iyengar
02-Dec-2014 04:12 AM

Comment Captivating and emotive.

Seshu Chamarty
01-Dec-2014 06:57 AM


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